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Nov. 14th, 2013 12:56 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
rhondacrockettYou think a goddamn firefight at an engagement party is just irregular? You think we get a lot of hitmen coming through town here? On a fricking Wednesday night? This is Ashtown, not goddamn Long Beach!
Does the above sound right? Particularly the cursing and the reference to Long Beach. Also, perhaps it should be engagement shower rather than party... *quibbles*
[Edited to add:] Also, is it 'pant legs' or 'pants legs'? Again, thanking you in advance for your patience and help.
Does the above sound right? Particularly the cursing and the reference to Long Beach. Also, perhaps it should be engagement shower rather than party... *quibbles*
[Edited to add:] Also, is it 'pant legs' or 'pants legs'? Again, thanking you in advance for your patience and help.
